Is this a good opening IF they made another Scarafce movie?( dont ask, my boyfriend)?

oh yeah i read that link! yeah s'pose but who would be narrating? it should either be Alvira, his mum, Gina or Lexi (new character) hmmmmm.......i cant decide. i dont think Alvira would give it a very big effect...maybe his mum or Gina or maybe even lexi but i think the entire script needs to be worked out first!lol